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Speaker
: Zeke
Evaluator
: Zelda
CRITERIA TO CONSIDER:
Introduction
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– I don’t believe you had a real attention getter. In fact, I think you began with a purpose statement, “Today I’m going to talk about…” The text says avoid such starts! Starting with the purpose statement doesn’t really pull me into your speech. You’ve had so many experiences with troubled kids, you could have started with a story—one that connects with us.
+ I really liked the way you followed the speech recipe. When I listened to you, I could follow you easily, especially when you made your transitions clear. You made me think you really wanted us to understand your message.
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What was the central idea of this speech?
I’m not 100% sure, but I think the C.I. was “Alternative schools have several unique benefits over traditional schools.”
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